my journey as shoes

We are learning to write a recount a recount that includes
a title
orientation with who what when why were
events that are in chronological order
conclusion that has a personal comment

August and may's owners birthday

( hi my name is april i'm a lefty shoe)(  hello my name is ashley i'm a righty shoe)(we are high tops)

It was a nice sunnie saturday and I was lying on the floor the all of a sudden I heard big thump’s my owner came along and grabbed us with a pair of socks,I knew what was coming  we were going out for a walk somewhere we were going to april made a bet to mays and augustus's house it was sad but true we were going to may's house it was their birthday today i was walking to mays house.

It was mays birthday and Tasman my owner stayed the night  we helped set up a tent we went home and grabbed Tasman's stuff and then we got taken off all we done was sit outside all night with tasman's friends shoes.

The next day Tasman slept in till like 8:30 then Tasman went inside and got her clothes on then came out and struggled to get one foot then the other I was yelling loosen my laces your hurting my seams but no she could not hear me I was sore for the rest of the day I feel like i've been ran over and my seams a broken then a dog sat on me and boy o boy did I scream but i’m a shoe some humans can’t hear me witch is amazing sometimes but then other times it sucks like earlier when she was putting her foot in me.

Later on that week tasman took her dog lady jane for a walk down to arthur fong park she had some cut up sausages to throw around for lady to get. A bird shat on me said ashley she took me home and put me under the tap then she stuffed me with newspaper and put me in the hot cylinder cupboard the next couple of days i stayed in there seeing no day night it was soo scary.Then on a saturday i heard someone pulling on the door then it opened i seen the light.Tasman put me on it was like i was brand new said ashley.

Then the next day we went back to august and may’s house we took  two dogs  for a walk to school we played a tasman and her friends played a game then the dogs  started to bark then we left itb was sooo fun said  april i want to go back later on that day we went to a house the wa a hill tasman started to do gymnastics down and up it then sadly  we had to leave i got taken off  when we got home and then we went to sleep hoping that the will never be another school holidays a gain with all the stuff that happened.

By Tasman